Age/Gender: 25, Male
Location: Tucson, AZ
Job: Student
Violence is not the answer. "Violence" is a question, and the answer is "Yes."
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You have a nice logo for newgrounds, but there's way too much going on there. The mushroom and Mario are wholly unnecessary; ditch those and try to make the first part with the shield and the word "formation" a little snappier and you might have something useable.
Nobody really wants to watch a logo sequence any longer than a few seconds, to be honest.
Author's Response:
agreed
but that part was just for fun
"can i make the shroom come up, and Mario fly in from the darkness to try to grab it?"
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Not funny. Not clever. Not well animated. And not intelligent at all.
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This is very artistic, I can tell you had a strong vision for this project. While it isn't the perfect game, you have a great narrative and the melding of platforming and rpg came together in a very unique way that hasn't been tried before.
I applaud your efforts, I hope you learned a lot about flash programming and can make the sequel even better.
I was a little confused about the backstory and why a computer would magically hold the memories of the girl and the boy, but ultimately it didn't really matter. I sat down, gave it a shot, and couldn't stop until I was finished.
This is great work, and I am going to mention this on my site, gamersuniversity.com
Excellent job!
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