Age/Gender: 25, Male
Location: Tucson, AZ
Job: Student
Violence is not the answer. "Violence" is a question, and the answer is "Yes."
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Flash Reviews: 264
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You have a nice logo for newgrounds, but there's way too much going on there. The mushroom and Mario are wholly unnecessary; ditch those and try to make the first part with the shield and the word "formation" a little snappier and you might have something useable.
Nobody really wants to watch a logo sequence any longer than a few seconds, to be honest.
Author's Response:
agreed
but that part was just for fun
"can i make the shroom come up, and Mario fly in from the darkness to try to grab it?"
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Not funny. Not clever. Not well animated. And not intelligent at all.
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This is very artistic, I can tell you had a strong vision for this project. While it isn't the perfect game, you have a great narrative and the melding of platforming and rpg came together in a very unique way that hasn't been tried before.
I applaud your efforts, I hope you learned a lot about flash programming and can make the sequel even better.
I was a little confused about the backstory and why a computer would magically hold the memories of the girl and the boy, but ultimately it didn't really matter. I sat down, gave it a shot, and couldn't stop until I was finished.
This is great work, and I am going to mention this on my site, gamersuniversity.com
Excellent job!
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Still terrible.
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Had a bit of a Cave Story feel about it. Nice work.
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Nothing less than I'd expect. Well done, friend.
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RIP Captain Lou Albano.
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Let's blame Blizzard for hosting an event 500,000 people want to go to for which they only have a 30,000 person legal capacity. Those jerks. How dare they. It's all their fault.
By the way, I DID go to Blizzcon and it was NOT that hard to get a ticket.
Also, it was awesome.
But this flash wasn't bad.
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This was well done and I can tell you put a lot of effort into it.
All else I can say though is that I was frustrated that there was no pause button, as long as it is.
But well done
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"This is neat...but it needs more substance."
You've got something here. Make the full effort and turn this into something complete and not just a handful of mediocre games that have been taped together.
Not bad, but you could have something great if you tried harder.
Author's Response:
I did make a big effort this is like the third game ive made so naturally its not gonna be amazing. Its a random handful of games because there simple games I was able to make. Keep watching for future stuff and ill be more original.
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